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真不错，比我可好多了
有几张十分生动传神
但是提几个小小建议：
快龙是属于比较胖的，你画得像营养不良
那几张用画图画得实在不敢恭维
第二张，天气小子，没身体？
其他都十分不错
Oh, say can you see by the dawn's early light
What so proudly we hailed at the twilight's last gleaming?
Whose broad stripes and bright stars thru the perilous fight,
O'er the ramparts we watched were so gallantly streaming?
And the rocket's red glare, the bombs bursting in air,
Gave proof thru the night that our flag was still there.
Oh, say does that star-spangled banner yet wave
O'er the land of the free and the home of the brave?
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